hey cody... btw don't accept this critique or it will be very bad on your ratings... so... i have to reach one hundred words or this thing will not let me send this fake critique... I call shenanigans... ah well... when you get a chance look up ace combat 5 unsung war... its awesome... and you know gregory the pillow is doing fine... I didn't finish my history classwork today... I was working on some stuff for the novel... I will review you on the details later... well I still need nine words... wibbley wobbley timmey wimmey... uh waffle cake (also those aren't my real feeling on the image, but i have to rate it to send this)
why the shit are you sending him a message through a critique?????
To those whom this may concern,
May I ask how mature you are, please note I didn't ask how old you are, and then tell me why you feel the need to swear in this situation. I also would like you to please try to do some thinking before sending a message that makes you look like a fool. In the end I did it because nobody does, and I like to do crazy, illogical things that nobody else does. Now that I have fed your appetite of curiosity, please realize that the world does not revolve around your ideology and people do many things that others do not understand and that there is a much nicer and polite way to receive information regarding someones personal actions with close friends.
The Red Paw
I'm 13. Well, it was 3 am so. Ok cool I'm a foo. Oh ok. That has nothing to do with that. I'm not a self-centered idiot. I was just asking a question. Chill.
excuse me princess. it seems you dont like my friend's offensive nature. you got a problem with the way he insults me? do yeah?
no, not really. he can be the way he wants to be that's fine. that's his nature.
... "I was just asking a question. Chill." ... wow... ok first, you are too young to be speaking in a way that inappropriate for any age (not that I am telling you to stop, that would be a much different conversation, as I am not the master of your life. but I will tell you right now that just because society shows you that its ok, doesn't mean a thing to some people and the internet is full of ignorant teens, and I am including myself to some degree, who don't understand that the internet is just like running into someone on the street when it comes to conversations. you SHOULD NOT EVER start talking to someone with a curse or you could end up in much different situation than you intended). Now to the topic at hand... you fell for it... when I specifically told you that maturity has nothing to do with age... and you still answered with your age... I fear for the younger generations as much as I do my own. 3 AM isn't a reason, it's an excuse for why you did something offensive. I never said you were, I said your ideas are not every bodies so try to be nice when you ask for the reason (for most I would just give the reason in some obscure and a random way, but your wording and tone are completely inappropriate). and the finale... (I am sorry for what you have unleashed but...) THANK YOU CAPTAIN OBVIOUS, I though you were using a hyperbole to be ironic in giving an imperative command, OF COURSE IT'S A QUESTION. and chill?... chill?... I have nothing to say to that
Yeah I am, I know that. But I do not cuss that often. For the most part, I only do when angry. I wasn't even angry at you, but apparently, I cussed. I apologize for that. But I actually recently got grounded from the internet for 4 days recently because I cussed a kid out for making fun of me and not leaving me alone.
But I answered with my age since I have NO idea if I even am "mature" at all. I believe that I am an ignorant fool most of the time, and I never really find myself being mature at all. So I answered with my age. Simple as so. I agree, it is an horrible excuse. I apologize for that too. Ok, I'm sorry that my wording offended you. Um...yeah? Ok then, be speechless.
... yeah that was not very smart, any way just so you know I was only semi-serious with this (the points still stand), I am not actually offended, I am against swearing myself, but there is no way to stop anyone so I just ask that people not use vulgarity when speaking to me at least. I do hope this will get you to think about what you say before you say it though